It was the teddy bear that was all over social media. Rumours said if you see it on the street it will haunt you. It was all over YouTube and when I saw it I was freaking out! I was saying to myself is this real? Is it? It can’t be. I ran as fast as I could home locking all the doors like it was a school lockdown. I was scared as hell. I remembered, the back door! It was unlocked. But it was too late. It was luckily a dream and I was alive. It was a scary nightmare.
Hey Alex,
sounds like this could be a good plot for a horror movie!
Good effort!
I would like you to work on;
– Punctuation
-Structure of writing piece (intro, middle and conclusion)
– Re-reading your work to see if it makes sense. (try using three before me)
Hello,
I like the horror genre,
What you should work on is your word choice and structure.