Paggy and Elmo were walking across the rover then they saw some weird and a random red ladder floating above the water. They got a rock and threw it at the ladder to see if it would move. It went through it! They were shocked! Then they saw it read throw money at this. So they got change and threw it at the ladder. But this time it hit the ladder and started sinking. Then they woke up, it was a dream. This was weird because they woke up on the pavement. They just got up and walked home confused.
Hello Alex,
I liked the way you have used the words in your story. However, there are mistakes that could have been avoided by rereading your work.
Could you please make sure you change your theme to your blog. It is not appropriate for school.
Thank you
Stef