“Why was that hat on the table” Asked Muk. Then Tay noticed Muk was wearing it. She was told it was haunted. “That’s haunted!” She screamed. He was making demonic scary sounds. He was possessed. “AAAHHH!” She squealed. She ran out the house and Muk chased her. Knocking the hat off his head was the only choice. She kept running. It was 11 at night and no one could save her. Then she quickly stopped, turned and knocked the hat off his head. He was fine! They walked home and Tay told him what had happened and they went home quickly.
This was a VERY good piece and it was difficult to find something you could improve on but maybe next time don’t rush the conclusion.