Hi Luka,
I think the story was quite entertaining with a funny ending.
But I didn’t understand what it meant by the dominos kept falling, bit confusing.
Hi Ben,
I really enjoyed the story and it was really funny.
But you could of included a problem.
Hi Adam, I really liked the use of paragraphs in this story. But I think you should have said what you did there.
Hi Will,
This story had great structure.
But I think you could of made the ending a bit happier. From Alex